Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Incongruously Repetitious, Repeating and Repetitive

Here's a good one, sent in by an LROD reader: Hi--Unfortunately we have decided not to include your poem in this issue of the Incongruous Quarterly.We appreciated the energy in the poem, but felt that we would have liked there to be more. Right now the poem feels a little repetitious, and some of the ideas being repeated (i.e. those about rejection) don't feel to us like they gain more significance as they reappear. Thank you for thinking of us, and good luck.


Anonymous said...

right now it feel repetitious?
how about if you staRT at it for 2 hours will word change? .....yea, so, be fully honest .
puff the magic dragon then you'll see.

Anonymous said...

What the hell is going on around here lately? Seriously, WHAT??!