Friday, June 22, 2007

Mary Ann Naples Just Can't

This agent wrote: "You are a lovely writer, and I see there is much here to work with. However, for whatever reason, I didn't connect emotionally with [tile of novel]. I can't give you a reason why this was so...I know you have in mind some changes that might make a difference, but until you really do the revision, I just can't say what kind of difference this might make." Doesn't she make you kind of nervous? I just want to hold her hand and say: It's okay, lady; don't worry. I'll figure it out myself. You go lie down and take a nap.

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