Here's a write-in comment about another of Narrative Magazine's story of the week, from one of the mice. I've added links:
what is up with this "looters" story? it reads like a summary of the story every middle-aged woman turns in for her first workshop. full of cliches and awkward summarizing (husband has affair and it's forgotten about, then suddenly he's in iraq?) and even bad edits; on the opening page the narrator refers to a character as "Michelle" before she is introduced as such.
Maybe it's because the writer is pretty (see photo above) and has an impressive bio.